Behind Bars

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Fingers take their seats
Onย alphabet stools unfirm
Waiting to be served in
Empty pints of thoughts

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  1. “Fingers hold pens
    And are led into dens
    Dens of thoughts blank
    Which conjure and evade
    Blank sheets and make them their homes”
    This is my take, trying to be an old lady even though I’m no where near. This is beautiful.

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  2. TERRIFIC! Amazingly written. Ahh…i am just re-reading. I am spell bound. “waiting to be served in empty pints of thoughts”- Oh my..such an ingenious mentation. I just donno what else to say. I would just sum up ….important (heartfelt) things are hardest to say. Rest, you work on. Thank you for sharing such a poetic wonder. Love you, Light. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. THANK YOU! I honestly had nothing on my mind today..nothing at all, no thoughts, so I wrote this somehow. I am very glad you liked it, R! And that it leaves you spell-bound – makes me speechless. You’re far too kind! โค
      It's so true what you said – Heartfelt things are the hardest to say – it's like lined inside the head but cannot be expressed, I know that feeling. ๐Ÿ™‚
      A humongous cloud of love for you, R!

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      1. My Pleasure, sweetie! Having nothing, you have written everything………such a skill. Plzzzzzzz teach me this. I have mailed your poetic lines to my cousin. He is a journalist. He instantly fell in love with your lines.

        Thanks for your humongous cloud of love….. I am all drenched. Who sieved it?
        Okay I am sending equally walloping cloud of love to you. This is rain proof….it will not drain but just warm you up in its cuddle. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. Aww, that’s very humbling. So to write on such random topics all you’ve to do is a little…Math ahahahaha I am just teasing you, R! XD
        Oh no..I shall mail you some tea, right now! Yay, I do feel warm, you’re the SWEETEST! โค

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      3. Ahhhaaaaaaaaaaaa no trapping me, D! I am a wind….it is suffocating and otiose attempt to trap me in your words. I know what is in your head and what is in the comment.

        By the way…when are your exams starting?

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      4. Why don’t you trust me! Ahahaha, yes well, I have a little weakness for Math but…it’s not like an addiction, I will always be there for you. ๐Ÿ˜€

        It’s on Sunday – an entrance exam, so not much of a mugging up session needed. Just a bit of MATH practice. XD

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      5. Thats like my D! It is okay………you can keep your M with you but out of my sight. My dad used to ask on my math exam day (deliberately) :Konsa exam hai…And I used to say Algebra….then he used to tease me :Dil Gabra. I used to smile at the rhyme “Algebra- Dil Gabra.

        Now, I am ready to take my Math exam every day just to have him besides me but he is no more to tease me. No smiles now. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

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      6. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ I don’t even know what to say, R. I cannot imagine how it must have felt like to lose him. Your are very brave, as I always say, and you will stay that way, I know. That’s such a heart-wrenching thought – I am ready to take my Math exam every day just to have him besides me but he is no more to tease me – know that he’s in a much better place and he always watches over you, maybe he is teasing you right now. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      7. May be he is teasing me right now but am not smiling for sure. He is in a much better place but I am in my worst ever phase. God was unfair. My dad was taken away from me when he was 47. My mom was just 40 then.
        FAr away from my dad but not so near to my mom even. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

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      8. At 47! That must have been devastating for your family. You’re right – it was unfair for you, but maybe something unbelievably good is in-store for you, R. You can always talk to me when you feel lonely.
        Fathers are so special, and more so for daughters.
        Why not call your mum to live with you in London, as in once you settle there?

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      9. I cannot talk my reasons and my mom’s reasons here, dear. Every day I have a new exam to excel……passing is far from it.
        What is this D! We are forced to accept who reject us and vice versa. I donno what am I talking about… Lets end this discussion here. I am just running insane. I should think positive. Sorry for all this, Light. Hope u understand. Take care.

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