The Girl with Pinocchio Eyes

Please don’t
drag the view
of endless shores
in chimes of coins

Let it dive in sardonic
bird-eye plight
If it feels too heavy
I shall wrap it around the
whiteness of my eyes twice

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  1. You always seem to be posting at the right time for me to put mind in orbit around your thoughts. Consider me a humble satellite of yours lol. I loved the title. I just finished my review/recap on the 7th episode of Pinocchio, all that remains is to proofread it and add the pictures before i post it, but that’s not the subject here. The subject he is the girl with the Pinocchio eyes. What happens to Pinocchio eyes when their owner lies? I’ll try to find out now. But i loved the title, it’s as surreal and beautiful as it can get. Now that i read again, it might not be about lies, it could be about what eyes can see and how they perceive it, sometimes sight might fool you, hence the Pinocchio eyes. Maybe, but i still love the title, i love it for sure! I like how the first part relates to the picture, feel the vast shore’s sight as long as your bare eyes can see, you don’t have to throw your coins in order to see it through the static binocular machine. Bird-eye plights, this one owned! It paces really well with the previous part of your poem, because if you can’t cherish that clearly the shore with bare eyes it will be just like a bird-eye plight, loved the comparison. “I shall wrap it around the whiteness of my eyes twice”, ya! Stop doing that! OK, keep it up xD How fragile and grandiose is this line at the same time? Around the whiteness of the eyes, but not on the iris so that they will still see… so awesome. Twice really does add more emphasis! Well done! πŸ™‚ Once again!

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    1. Humble satellite! Gomawo! Chincha, chincha gomawo, chingu! You’re the daebak-est! :’)
      I haven’t yet watched the 7th episode! Wae? Because, I’m not well either. Ah, I’ll watch it now, that my senses have returned. xD
      The title is definitely because of ‘Pinocchio’ the drama, it was stuck in my head, I had to use it and I did somehow, lol. To me it’s as surreal as to you, I’m not very sure why I used it but it felt right to. It is moreover based on how seeing everything can be as much of a plight as limiting the sight. Also as you so very well said ‘if you can’t cherish that clearly the shore with bare eyes it will be just like a bird-eye plight’. Thank you very much! Hehehe I love it when you go – “Stop doing that! OK, keep it up” because that makes me think ‘chincha?!’ literally, I always do that, it is compulsive lol! XD It’s so great and humbling to read your comments. Always a delight to know that someone’s there who ‘knows’ what this is about.
      Twice really does add more emphasis, so, thank you, Kwon! Your support means a lot. It really really does. πŸ™‚

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      1. Yush, i’m orbiting around the poems, i hope i won’t be hit by an asteroid! Why you’re not well? :O *wishes that Gomenne Woman will get better NAO!*
        I’m really glad you used it because it would be a shame if that title wouldn’t have come out of your mind, i’m really glad that’s the title! Yes! Because some parts are so awesome! You should never stop doing that xD No matter how much i’ll tell ya stop doing that, the only reason i’m saying it it’s because i’m like come on, how many more daebak-est (i stole it xD) thingies can appear in such a littel poem?! and then i’m like oh yeah, keep ’em coming!! but you have your chincha moment when i do that xD When i find the time i will invest in older beauties of yours! Ha! That’s how i’ll be referring to your poems, beauties XD If your poems where a big band with many members and they played post punk/new wave they would be called The Beauties lol, they’d sound like The Cure xD

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      2. Asteroids, ooh there’ll be a lot of those. xD It’s the cold! Woohoo, bloody cold, sore throat, what’s better, right?Oh, I’ll tell you, top it with sinusitis! Yoshi! Daebak all the way! Sorry, it’s the chilliness of Winter that’s speaking. Gomen ne *there you go*

        And, whaaa did you just..THE CURE! THE CURE?! OH MY…just kill me for i want this to be the last thing I ever read! The Cure, is life. You’re the coolest daebak-est person ever. I cannot wait for the band, The Beauties, to release their first single, hehehe πŸ˜€ You can check the ‘past records’ anytime lol, not sure if they are any good though. ^_^
        Oh oh and if you like The Cure then maybe you’d like The Stone Roses too, if you don’t already that is. Here!

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      3. *kicks and punches asteroids and falls into a black hole* Woah, you’re being tormented too! Winter’s showing you his ugly face as well! Winter, show you best face nao! Hope you get better nao πŸ˜€ Yush! The Cure πŸ˜€ Have you seen them live? My favorite albums are Pornography, Bloodflowers and Wish πŸ˜€ *doesn’t kill her, this isn’t the last thing she reads* The Beauties will release an album once you gather 15 new poems xD I will check and i’ll write down my thoughts, don’t worry x)
        woo! Pretty cool sound! Soothing and energetic at the same time due to the melody and the more powerful moments respectively! Time for something more like-minded with the weather πŸ˜€ I’m darkening it a bit, but ok *.*

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      4. What’s with the na0’s XD I feel better nao! Thank you, nao! This doesn’t make sense, nao. Nao, that was fun, nao. xD No, I haven’t! D: My favourite albums are ‘Three Imaginary boys’, ‘Disintegration’ and yes of course ‘Wish’! Who are the band members, again? 15 new poems! Must get some soju supply ready. xD Wahaaa this sure does bear likeliness with the weather. But it is not as cruel as i-will-kill-you winds blowing these days. I like this band. Arigato! O_O Oh and did you listen to this soundtrack which is not on Pinocchio but is like everywhere on youtube as the ‘OST’ bwahahaha, it’s catchy though -.- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t_HVqSySTrs

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      5. Nao nao nao nao nao! Instead of now xD Nao! I’ve seen them once x) They were playing for 3 hours and 30 minutes $.$ I don’t know who are in the band at the moment because i didn’t like that much their last 2 albums, but Robert Smith is for sure in there xD Yush, right them nao xD Yup, it’s more gentle that these vicious winds >.> When he sings Pinoooocchio it’s so funny for some reason xD Hadn’t heard that though o.o it’s the invisible PinocchiOST xD Another goldie oldie to chase the wind away, elegant chilling sound: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ee-OBWRbURA

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      6. Nao I knew that already that you’re using it for now, nao I am not that stupid nao. Oh, must stop this nao. Now! xD Whaaa must’ve been a brilliant experience to watch them live. Apparently they’re all still in the band, there’s an album of theirs coming next year! πŸ˜€ Hahaha i know right? The Pinoooocchio part is..scary to be honest. Especially in this cold..hmm…gomen ne xD Another classic, such warmth in his voice. :’)

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      7. No no no you’re not stupid! No! No nao no ever! xD Yep, but for so many hours from a moment and on i was so exhausted i was like “please, stop it now! but then, i wanna listen more!” xD Hope it’s gonna be good, i want to be like Bloodflowers in fact, in that mood πŸ˜€ It’s indeed scary xD And a sad wintry one πŸ˜₯ Hope i’m not tormenting you with all these songies :O https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wTe1ljdLt1E

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      8. Hehehe, now that you know I can be intimidating, don’t back off! xD Yeah I hope the same, they hardly disappoint so it’ll be good I hope, yeah something like ‘The Last day of summer’ would be so good, oh summer, summer, come back! T_T
        Aww I have listened to this before O_O but a long long time ago, maybe a few years hehe but this is really good, nao nao you’re not tormenting me at all, I love sad songs. Arigato! Stop crying. -.- :’)
        Do you listen to korean-indie?

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      9. *backs off one step*
        Yeah, that was a hell of a song! And Maybe Someday too πŸ˜€ Summer is cool, but i don’t mind winter unless i don’t get sick and now i am sick xD
        I’m glam i could remind you an old tune πŸ˜€ nao nao nao, lol nao that i think of it the name of the girl in the japanese liar game is Kanzaki Nao xD Gomen-points stolen xD Very good song, soothing, paces well at this hour!! About Korean-indie, i’ve listened a few stuff, but whatever comes my way xD And i searched a bit the artist who did the picture in the video and she/he does a really good work O.O I unearthed a song xD https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HCm6gRHINqA

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      10. Maybe Someday! Yoshi! I don’t mind it much either but I know I’ll be constantly unwell, just the “intensity” will change…headaches are a prime these days. Daebak ne? XD
        Ahh, I know right!! If only if only I could hold a pencil properly hahahaha but really I have checked the artwork too. Sugoi ne!
        Wow wow, Savage Garden, good old days when Darren Hayes or Daniel Jones were the only choices. I quite like “To the moon and back” actually, much better than Truly Madly deeply shtick xD

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      11. I had a grey Phillips one too! Which I broke then I got a yellow Aiwa walkman which again got destroyed due to my then suppressed Gomenne angst. Nao it all makes perfect sense. XD
        Darren Eyes!! Loooool yep that’s his new name from now on XD

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      12. Could it be… that we had the same Philips? xD I didn’t destroy it though, it kept me good company until the mp3s made their powerful attack xD It should have been on the news! Suppressed Gomenne angst destroys Aiwa! Aiwa says Sugoi and jumps off the cliff xD

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      13. Oh, chincha?! Maybe! xD I broke both so my parents decided not to bless me with another for the same fate awaits.
        Well, you’re a careful then! It was not on the news? Why! Aha, I’ll have to become a reporter to revenge this – the irony. xD
        Aiwa was a Japanese company so yes Sugoi could have been it’s last words as soon after it shut down, during the era of mp3s, it pretty much jumped off a cliff for all we know! XD

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      14. Although, the third one would be the divine one, the one to go through all the struggle and make it alive, the blessed one xD
        Sometimes i’m careful, sometimes i’m not xD It depends xD Yush you have to become a reporter! The irony of revengah!
        Aiwa Kawaiiwa! Sugoi!

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      15. Lol, we never got to see the ‘Blessed Walkman’! xD
        I am careful with my mobile phones, I guess, but then I have a Nokia (The Unbreakable Phone) so you can well understand. xD
        The Hipster Rhyme – Aiwa Kawaiiwa!
        What a MEGA-SUGOI Video, loooool ahahahaha XD

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      16. It was so blessed you never saw it xD
        3210 was the ultimate master protection phone xD Unbreakable even in a nuclear holocaust xD
        Aiwa Kawaiiwa yaw yaw yaw megah rhyme hipstah ah yaw ahaa it’s the Aiwa not from Iowa it’s the Nipponipponippon revengah, kawaii Kawaiiowa yaw!
        Yeah, it was a mega-sugoi weapon for your ears only xD

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      17. Are you trying to be funny today, Sire Kwon? Btw thanks for restoring my internet! Finally! -.-
        Damn, 3210 will be the apocalypse of ALL bloody smart phones! AHAHAHAHAHA – said 3210 Lol nuclear holocaust resistant – true that! xD
        That rap! SLLLLAAAAYYY! Ahahahahahha, “Nipponipponippon revengah” OMCH, I cannot. *dies laughing* IT’S THE BEST THING I HAVE READ ON WP. XD
        THIS will be our island’s official rap song. HAIL! πŸ˜€

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      18. I’m Kwon with the Pinocchio cigarettes xD You’re very welcome, i will fix once again if anything goes wrong, i’m the internet resurrection! You weren’t expecting 3210 to make an entrance, ah? xD Hell yeah! Nipponipponippon revengah everybody put your hands up i’m the nipponipponippon avengah! Nooooooo, your poems are bestah than zis! Yihah! Island rap xD And now take zis with Yoo Inna ❀ singing in the beginning and then born hater πŸ˜€ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=87ihUtC4CNM

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      19. You sure are the internet catastrophe as well as ressurection. Kwon works in paradox. xD
        Nippon avengah! When Bakaman goes – I HAVE AN ARMY, I’ll be like “WE HAVE KWON – The Chincha-Internet-Chincha-Saviour-Chincha-the-Chinchaest-ChinchaOutThere” XD

        Oh my, I watched this! Yoo Inna – Why so gorgeous! Wow, Mama awards are so glamorous. I’m starstruck Babo. My favourite was BTS and Block B’s duel though. I am noona to BTS but whatever I love them ahahahah ❀

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      20. I am the Jesus of the internet! I am the apocalypse and resurrection of it! xD Yah! Kwon, one man army! Yiiiihah! It’s all Chincha! XD
        Yeaaaah and such a cute voice! Yoo Inna ❀ Yup, they did a good work! My Pinocchio review/recap took like forever yesterday because i was watching MAMA's xD Yeah, that was good too da duel πŸ˜€ And i'm their hyung xD They should respect us!!

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      21. Damn! The Jesus of Internet is here and I didn’t even know. My bad. XD I haven’t been able to watch it, thank to your Godly powers but please be a little gracious to me Lord Kwon and I shall watch the whole show. You’ll get so chincha-points for that, mate! Come on! XD Loool respect us BTS kiddos, we’ll teach you some better Engrish. English with “R” nothing gets bettah! xD

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      22. Yush, i was hiding, i am the Jesus of the Internet after my holy Resurrection xD I will be gracious enough to you so that you’ll watch it xD Chincha poiiiiints! Yes indeed, they should respect us! And Engrish are on the way for them! I found our future job, teaching Engrish to all SK idols xD

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      23. Woooaahhh! AJA! You’re right, we must become Engrish teachers for SK Idols! Considering the current situation of Engrish in SK…we will be overworked but you can finally piggyback Na Ra after she faints from all the new Engrish words she has to learn! It is a dream-come-true job for you. XD

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      24. Bwahahahaha SK needs teachah like yoouh, mateh. XD
        Totallieh! Pigguback teachers – Woohoo, I’m sure NipponNipponAwesomeNippon will certainly be up for this ideah of youahs.XD
        “Chinchaman will not let the famous korean non-ageing-cutie Jang Na Ra walk. AT ALL”
        You’ll have to AVENGAH this news report. Oh it’s the circle of life. xD
        Have you watched this?

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      25. LoooooooooooooL!! Yeah! With the raffiki monkey raising simba to the skies XD
        Woohoo! I will teach em secretly the chincha language! Oh wait, they will teach it to me xD I will teach Engrish xD
        Nevah evah again! I’ll be walking for her xD
        It;s the circle of chincha for chincha is life xD In the role of Jesus, eat, this is my chin, drink, this is my cha, chincha!

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      26. Hehehehe, that’s right they’ll teach us Engrish and we’ll teach them English but since there will be SO MANY Engrish-ers that…RIP English. O_O
        Circle of Chincha where in the Chincha cave everyone does the chincha cha cha cha. XD
        “Eat, this is my chin, drink, this is my cha, chincha!” – Maybe you can use this at the cover of your book The Chincha Diaries (The Jesus in me) XD

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      27. You’re taking it to a whole new level nao! the Jesus in me xD Chincha cha cha cha, this will go well along with clapping to the rhythm of cha cha cha xD
        At least we’ll try to teach English xD But Engrish will eventually win us and we will become Engrish teachers as well xD

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      28. The rhythm of Chincha cha cha cha can be used for The Beauties maybe. If you could please share the copyrights XD
        Nao nao, do you think it’s that easy to learn Engrish nao? It’s more than mispronouncing Ls and over-stressing Rs. Engrish is not a language, or an art, Engrish is a way of life. XD

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      29. Lol never forget kwenchana – it’s probably the third most used word after chincha and michoseo xD
        Well, well yes! Have you watched Ryo and Keiko Kitagawa Dakishimetai – Shinjitsu No Monogatari? Not many EEEEEEEEH moments there though xD
        And, are you not watching Misaeng? O_O

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      30. Yeah, hahaha it was a sad ending for Ryo. :***( EEEEEEH tears of ice bwahahahaaha XD
        I know, totally is, although it’s a rip-off of a very old Russian song, ofc the korean version is a LOT better.
        And, start watching Misaeng already, will you? Or should I go gangster-style again! It’s an amazing drama and Siwan’s acting is stunning. *dreamy sigh*
        Maybe you’ll like this too!

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      31. But Ryo was an elegant figure, i am really glad he shared this love with the girl. And he was playing in my favorite drama ever, 1 Litre of Tears, so he’s pretty high to my eyes as an actor. Russian song huh? *suddenly wants to listen to Katyusha*
        Are you threatening me to start Misaengengenge? >.> Dis song is good too, but the previous one was more passionate xD

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      32. 1 litre of tears was so perfect in depicting the characters, it was my first J-drama with Ryo in it before that I only knew the Hana Kimi side of J-dorama. xD Oh and it’s theme song Only Human ;_;
        Hahaha, no, please don’t worry I’ll request “Would you please watch Misaeng, please? Please?” o.o

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  2. Hey you. How are things? “The difference between sight and perspective” eh? I wasn’t understanding so I read some comment. You really have a way with words, my friend. I hope you had a great weekend.
    πŸ™‚ ❀

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    1. Thank you so very much, my dear friend! You’re a constant source of light in my life. I’m so thankful for your love and blessings. ❀
      The weekend went alright, but today has been going a bit harsh – with my mum…so let's just hope I manage to pass under the radar for the rest of the day.
      Hope you had a great weekend as well! πŸ™‚
      Much love!

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