Invisibility

hands me a flower –
she dances her way
by another planet
plucks a pink four
petaled one
names it after
herself
as a bird perches
on her shoulder
“Some things, you
appreciate
only when kept
close to you.”
she whispers

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20 comments

  1. Ha! I came here to say bad things to you! I loved Invisibility! Loving something you wrote is rare, unique, it never happens, so you must have gone chincha by reading it. I know, it happens once in a lifetime. It seems i have one lifetime for each poem of yours i read. XD Highly enjoyed the flow of the poem, it held a sense of pinku affection and winku caring (nevermind, i just wanted to use the phrase winku pinku XD ) as the lines were marching one after the other. And the ending was perfect! Waeyo?! Because you oppose the usually correct idiom saying “you don’t know what you’ve got until it’s gone”. Because sometimes you don’t have to lose something/someone to realize its/his/her worth, because with bare eyes you witness it by keeping close this dear feeling leaving the distance unable to breathe, henceforth it doesn’t expand. You you you blind bird you, you see more things than watching birds can!

    And a small gift, because Ada Zhuang is love: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_H7hKLK-43w

    PiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiS: No PS for you! XD

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    1. “Ha! I came here to say bad things to you!” – Gets me everytime I read this comment. I can imagine someone like Ri On (in his crazy mode) pointing a finger at me and saying that XD XD
      Why thank you very much for your kindness! It’s great that you could look through the poem. Hahaha ‘winku pinku’ okay I get it. XD
      I’m blinder than you think though. Haha 🙂
      Wow that voice! So serene! Wonderful. Arigatou ne, chingu. Ada Zhuang – I’ll have to rampage through the internet for more :’)
      Loooool I see what you did there ahahaha piiiiiiiiiiiiii XD

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      1. Yush, i was pointing my finger at you sayin’ haaaaa! *keeps pointing & pointing & pointing because she’s blinder than i thinku* 😀 No, me thank you for the poetry flowing from within! 🙂 And Ada Zhuang is so not NUUUUUUUUOH but so YUUUUUUUUUUSH! So glad you liked her voice and the song ^-^ No you didn’t see what i did there because you’re blinder than i think piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii XD

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    1. Hello Lorrie! 🙂
      I see “her “the same as you do..had a little girl dressed in pink idea all along while I was writing, also I imagined her with silver hair for some reason. Of course we had the same image in mind! ^_^
      I’ve missed you too! Love and hugs, my friend. ❤ ❤

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